Well, this is for some fanmade book some people(included me) are working on, heres a link to the thread: http://www.one-ring.co.uk/phpBB2/viewto ... 964#171964

i've made the profiles and some descriptions(only for the named dwarfs in the book of mazarbul), its a bit much and i hope you like it(i've made it with a point calculator: http://membres.lycos.fr/l01c/lotrcostcalc.html). if it's any good i could make some other profiles for some goblins like the great chieftain etc
anyway here they are:

Floi: Floi has some great fury. When he sees the East gate of Moria he runs a fast line towards it. He kills the Great Chieftain(goblin) and got killed himself.
F/S S D A W C M W F Points
6/- 4 6 3 2 6 3 0 0 75
Wargear: Axe/handweapon, Armor
Special rules: Fearless
Possible conversion(or use): Dwarf king

Óin: Óin is one of the dwarfs who went on the noble quest to reclaim Erebor. Now he's on his way to reclaim Moria.
F/S S D A W C M W F Points
6/- 4 6 2 2 5 3 1 1 65
Wargear: Axe/handweapon, Armor
Upgrades: Heavy armor-> +5 points
Possible conversion(or use): Dwarf king

Ori: Ori was also part of the compagnie to reclaim Erebor. But in the attempt to retake Moria he plays a more important role: He carries The Book of Mazarbul. In this book is written everything what the dwarfs have been through
F/S S D A W C M W F Points
6/- 4 6 2 2 5 3 1 1 65
Wargear:Axe/handweapon, Armor
Upgrades: Heavy armor-> +5 points, The Book of Mazarbul-> +20 points
Special rules: The Book of Mazarbul: With the book Ori gets +2C(Because he wants to protect the book at any costs to be remebered) and he get -2F(cause it is difficult to fight with a book in your hand) and his stand fast is now 28cm(cause the other dwarfs are loyal to him because he has the book)
Possible conversion(or use): Bilbo(since he already got a book)

Frár, Lóni and Náli are the dwarfs who willingly sacrficed themselves at the bridge of Khazad-dum in order to protect the other dwarfs.

Frár
F/S S D A W C M W F Points
5/- 4 6 2 1 4 1 0 0 35
Wargear:Two-handed weapon, Armor
Upgrades: Heavy armor-> +1 points
Special rules: Bodyguard
Possible conversion(or use): Dwarf captain

Lóni
F/S S D A W C M W F Points
5/4+ 4 6 2 1 4 1 0 0 40
Wargear: Bow, Armor
Upgrades: Heavy armor-> +1 points
Special rules: Bodyguard
Possible conversion(or use): Múrin

Náli
F/S S D A W C M W F Points,
5/- 4 6 2 1 4 1 0 0 40
Wargear:Axe/handweapon, Shield, Armor
Upgrades: Heavy armor-> +1 points
Special rules: Bodyguard
Possible conversion(or use): Drár

Note: You can't bodyguard anyone with a bodyguard-rule

hope you like them

70 fate points!!!!!!!!

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Anduril, Flame of the West forged from the shards of Narsil,
Sauron will not have forgotten the sword of Elendil

nah, not 70fate points, just 70 points, its only because someway letters are lager than numbers,
and btw he has 0 fate, just count the numbers
(ill try to edit it)

oh you mean 70 points in a game cost

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Anduril, Flame of the West forged from the shards of Narsil,
Sauron will not have forgotten the sword of Elendil

yep, but someway 2 spaties become 1 spatie if you post them, thats why the stats arent right below each other
sorry for the chaos:P

little detail

A+W<4 for Loni Nali and Frar, which means that heavy armor should be +1 instaed of +5

for the rest great profiles, I especcialy like the Book of Mazarbul

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It's not about our past.
It's about our future.

srr for the Thread Necromancy, it was a link from the campaign forum which is still quite lively (vivid?)

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It's about our future.

What the hell is a spatie?

Anyway, why not just use generic Captain and Shieldbearer stats for these Characters?

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Gondor: 2339pts
Rohan: 1318pts
Dwarves: 2482pts
Elves: 1091pts
Mordor: 2305pts
Isengard: 1762pts
Moria: 1463pts
Evil Men: 381pts

Foreign word for a 'space'?

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Indeed
it's dutch, a rather ugly language which I have to hear al day, poor me
I'd say let's use Quenya as a world language, it's designed to be beautifull!
Or English with Irish pronounciation, not bad for a second choice

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It's about our future.

it is indeed the dutch word for space (sorry for it:3)
anyway, on the forums you cant put to spaces after each other:3
thats why it looks so messed up

good point of 1p for heavy armor!

and why not use captain and shieldbearer profiles? well, the characters have now more depht in them and thats what i like. not just common heroes but heroes with a story^^

oh and before people of the Netherlands take offence:

I don't like Dutch in any way, regardless of pronounciation, I really prefer English (West-Vlaams has got some beauty but is unfortunatly completely incomprehensible)

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It's about our future.

You could use . _ - or : though?

See?

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i've tried that, but it didnt become more clear, so i left it with spaces

Hey BaruKhazad,
I'd like to point out some things that might not work:

Floi with 1 wound and no Fate??? I understand that he got himself killed recklessly (albeit heroically) but that doesn't turn him into a 'oops an arrow wounded him he's dead' kind of a hero. I believe that with 2 wounds and no Fate he would be still be vulnerable and yet worth taking in an army. Also,
Loni lacks a shoot value (I'm assuming a 4+ or 3+)

Sorry if this sounded like a rant, I really like your profiles and no mistake

ah! i see, i forgot to write down his shoot value
it should indeed be a 4+

and i'll give floi 2wounds(but 5points etc)

thanks for the critic, it helps me to create good and balanced profiles^^